Chapter 586 – A Turning Point in The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn) by C.M. Thompson
In this chapter of The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn), C.M. Thompson introduces major changes to the story. Chapter 586 shifts the narrative tone, revealing secrets, advancing character arcs, and increasing stakes within the Romance genre.
Wiona was absolutely ecstatic.
She could hardly think straight—she was that happy.
Evelyn was pregnant!
Was she really about to become a grandma?
After Brooks was born, Wiona’s health had suffered, and she never managed to have another child, so Brooks had always been her one and only. Now, seeing her friends dote on their grandkids, she couldn’t help but feel just a little jealous every time.
She wanted that joy for herself.
Ever since Brooks turned twenty-four, she’d dropped hints—sometimes gentle, sometimes not-so-subtle—about settling down. But Brooks always managed to dodge the topic.
When Rosa was still alive, there’d even been talk about Brooks being set up with Evelyn. Back then, Wiona had no idea Evelyn was already involved with Charles, or that they’d had a daughter together.
She’d always felt Evelyn’s background as a housekeeper’s daughter wasn’t quite good enough, but since Brooks was open to the idea, she’d gone along with it anyway.
Who could have guessed how complicated things would get?
Once Brooks fell for Evelyn, it was like no other woman existed. He gave up the whole forest for a single tree, and, truthfully, Wiona never thought that tree was all that special.
That resentment lingered, buried deep.
And when she found out about Evelyn’s past with Charles, her disapproval only grew. She made things difficult, always opposing them.
But over the last half-year, her feelings towards Evelyn had started to shift. Especially after what happened recently—Evelyn had really started to win her over.
Her decision to come to the hospital today with homemade food was her own way of waving a white flag.
Now, hearing Evelyn was pregnant, even her last bit of resentment melted away. All she could think about was holding her grandchild.
Gripping the bag of food, Wiona hurried toward the hospital room, buzzing with excitement. On the way, she called Mr. Robinson.
His health had been fragile for three years now. When the family business ran into trouble, he’d fallen ill and never fully bounced back. Through it all, Wiona and Brooks had relied on Mr. Robinson’s support.
She was grateful for that—and she knew he was just as eager as she was for a great-grandchild.
As soon as the call connected, Wiona blurted out, “Dad, Brooks is going to have a baby! You’re going to be a great-grandpa!”
“That’s right, Evelyn is pregnant. I’m at the hospital now. Don’t worry—I know, I promise, I won’t stand in their way anymore.”
She quickly reached the door to the hospital room and hung up.
Inside, Evelyn had just woken up. Hearing Wiona’s voice, she tried to sit up.
Brooks squeezed her hand gently, reassuring her to stay put and rest. Then he got up and opened the door.
He filled the doorway—tall, broad-shouldered—and looked at Wiona with a respectful, slightly wary tone. “Mom, what brings you here?”
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