Chapter 628 – A Turning Point in The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn) by C.M. Thompson
In this chapter of The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn), C.M. Thompson introduces major changes to the story. Chapter 628 shifts the narrative tone, revealing secrets, advancing character arcs, and increasing stakes within the Romance genre.
The noise of the mall faded away, tucked behind the cozy nook of the café.
Charlie nestled up to Luna, clinging like a little kitten. She kept her head down, taking tiny, careful bites of the delicate pastries Charles had just brought over.
Across from them, Charles couldn’t tear his eyes away from his daughter’s face. He drank in every tiny shift in her expression, as if he could capture and hold onto this miracle—this reunion he thought he’d lost forever. He watched so intently he barely even blinked.
His phone, left on the table, lit up with a silent flash. A message popped up—it was from someone he’d stationed near Evelyn: They’d be at the mall entrance in just a few minutes.
Charles’s heart tightened. An anxious, electric tension wound through him. He drew in a shaky breath, chest twisting with a riot of hope and dread.
He wanted so badly for Charlie, in the instant she saw Eve, to remember—to have those hidden memories come rushing back. To recall she once had a mother who loved her with everything she had.
Even if…
Even if that meant she’d also remember him—the father who let her down, who’d been cold and distant for those five lost years. Even if she hated him, resented him, never forgave him—that didn’t matter.
All he wanted was for Charlie to find her way back to Eve. For Eve to have her daughter again.
He owed Charlie so much. He would spend the rest of his life trying to make it right, if only he could catch the faintest glimmer of forgiveness from her and from Eve.
But fear crept in, cold as ice, wrapping around his heart. He was terrified that Charlie would look at Eve with the same wary, closed-off eyes she’d once turned on him.
How could Eve, after everything she’d suffered, possibly bear that kind of rejection from her own child? She loved Charlie so much.
If Charlie pushed Eve away the way she’d pushed him, Charles didn’t know if Eve could survive it.
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