Summary of Chapter 58 – A pivotal chapter in Destined To Be Greatness by Liz Kent
The chapter Chapter 58 is one of the most intense moments in Destined To Be Greatness, written by Liz Kent. With signature elements of the Internet genre, this part of the story reveals deep conflicts, shocking revelations, and decisive character changes. A must-read for anyone following the narrative.
After a while nothing really happened so I lost myself in my thoughts just thinking about the future. Where would Jay and I be in 5 years' time or even in a couple of weeks? Ever since my pack turned up on her doorstep our relationship has changed drastically, not that I'm complaining or anything but it's just so much to think about. When we first arrived she was hell bent on ignoring me and pushing me away, but here I am now lying beside her as she gets her full powers after we completed the mating process. It's just mind blowing on how things can change at the snap of your fingers.
I felt Jay's hand start to tremble in my own then I noticed that her whole body was shaking again but this time Jay didn't utter a word or a scream. I felt the panic rise in myself, I could handle a scream, a whimper or a yelp but silence I couldn't handle, silence meant there was nothing. I was about to go into a mental break down when the white light that surrounded Jay started to pulse and slowly disappeared into Jay's body. I watched with my eyes the size of saucers; I couldn't believe what I was seeing one minute the light was there and then it was gone.
The room was now back to normal and the others were starting to stir.
"Urgh!" I heard a groan.
"What the hell happened?" Another voice grumbled.
I wasn't really listening to what they were saying because I pushed them into the background giving my undivided attention to my mate. Her body stopped shaking and she was now just lying limp on the bed. The only thing that was reassuring me that she was alive was the constant rise and fall of her chest.
~ Jay's P.O.V ~
I felt like I was fire. I could feel my insides boiling making my skin crawl, it was a feeling that I would never want to live through again for as long as I lived.
My eyes were closed but I wasn't surrounded by darkness in fact all I could see was white and it was pulsing almost like it had its own heartbeat. The more I tried to figure out what was going on the light got brighter and brighter until it completely disappeared and then I was left in darkness.
My body was no longer burning, my skin was no longer simmering and I felt like I was complete almost like I was full after eating a three course meal.
I didn't like the darkness that clouded my eyes and my mind; I didn't like not knowing what was going on and what was going to happen next. I had to try and escape this darkness that suddenly fell upon me.
I tried to open my eyes or at least move my little pinkie but nothing was responding. I kept on trying refusing to give up but still I couldn't move a single limb and I was starting to get frustrated.
"You finally gained your full powers." Penny said from beside me. Straining my neck I looked over Cameron's body to find Penny in Leon's embrace.
"What does that mean for me now?" I asked.
"It means that you need more training." Leon grinned from ear to ear. I slumped back down on the bed with a groan whilst everyone else laughed at my expense.
~ Two Weeks Later ~
I flopped down on the ground panting, my chest rising and falling rapidly. The grass tickled my sweat covered body as I lie under the baking sun in the back garden of the pack house. Since I finally received my full powers Leon has upped my training and he has been pushing me to the limit, that's how I ended up here panting like a dog and sweating like a pig. I don't mind being pushed but recently I haven't been feeling very well and I'm finding myself tiring faster as each day goes by. Cameron's noticed this as well and as usual he's constantly fussing over me but I just tell him that my body is still getting used to my new powers.
A shadow appeared blocking the sun from shining in my eyes.

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