Chapter overview: Chapter 29 from Alana
In this standout chapter of the Internet novel Alana, Z Cr4vinz introduces new challenges, powerful emotions, and major plot progress that captivate readers from beginning to end.
Push It Real Good!
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Alana's POV
Beware of everything life threw at you.
Most of them are lessons and some are just signs of hatred from the universe.
"Leo." I breathe and he smiles.
"Wow, you've changed. A lot." He eyes my body and I internally cringe as Ashley comes to view.
I need to get out of this situation.
"Yea...um so have you." I mutter and I stare head-on at Ashely who smirks at me.
"Well if it isn't miss suicidal." My breath hitches and I can't help but notice that Aiden tensed from behind me.
"Ashely," Leo warns and she giggles evilly, staring at Aiden.
"See you found yourself a rebound. Needed someone to numb the pain?" She mocks, tilting her head.
"After seven years? No puta." I roll my eyes ready to leave when she speaks up.
"I sure hope there aren't any cliffs nearby." She pretends to lean in on Aiden and whispers."Don't yell at her too loud, she might try to kill herself."
That's it.
Throwing my hand back I was about to punch her, but instead, the world seemed to be moving way to fast and I flew in the air.
"Aiden put me down!" I yell and he grunts.
"Watch yourself, don't think for a second that you're any better than Alana cause your not. You're standing here with your flat face trying to insult people but your whole presence is an insult." Aiden tells her and I grin at his back.
"I was having a great time with my girlfriend until you two dumbos decided to ruin it. Try her again and I will end you." With that, I am spun around and I wave happily and the couple.
"That's not the point Alana, I want to be here for you...Open up to me." He says and I was done.
"Open up to you?! Do you think it's that easy? Oh, Aiden guess what? When I was young my parents committed suicide all of my high school knew and you know what they did, they bullied me! Every day I would walk home limping or with a black eye. I met Leo and I thought he cared about me but not. I tried to commit suicide seven times. Twice when I was with him. So there! Are you happy! I opened up to you." I slam the fridge door close and stomped to my room. I close and lock the door before plopping on my bed and staring angrily at the ceiling.
Aiden's POV
This was definitely not what I expected. I watch her furiously retreat and run my hand through my hair.
I pushed her and she wasn't ready. It's probably way too early for her to tell me this and I pressured her to.
"Dammit!" I yell.
I sigh, walking over to the couch, and sitting.
She's going to wake up tomorrow and I'm going to be there on my knees.
That's a promise.

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