Chapter overview: Chapter 52 from Alana
In this standout chapter of the Internet novel Alana, Z Cr4vinz introduces new challenges, powerful emotions, and major plot progress that captivate readers from beginning to end.
Alana's POV
The Eiffel Tower was way bigger than what was shown on television or pictures.
It was beautiful. We took so many selfies and just normal pictures. We got an extra special one where someone offered to take one of both of us. I loved every moment.
We were back at the hotel and Aiden just came from the shower, a towel loosely placed around his waist.
"What you up to?" He asks as I scroll through my phone.
"Posting."
"We took so many today." He chuckles pulling on some basketball shorts.
"I know..." I murmur distracted and my phone suddenly disappears from my hands. "Hey!"
He drops it onto the ground and moves to lay on me.
"I need attention." He says bluntly and I give him a flat look.
"Hey...let's get to the hot tub." He suggests.
"You just took a shower." I raise an eyebrow at him and he shrugs.
"It doesn't matter. Nothing matters when it comes to you, baby." He winks and I roll my eyes amused.
"I still don't understand why you chose to wear that over all the other one-pieces that I brought for you." He complains as I walk ahead of him in a simple black bikini.
"Babe, it's a private tub." I deadpan and he sighs.
"Someone might see you."
"From where? The sky?" I mutter sarcastically and he grumbles. Grabbing my hand as I lower myself into the hot tub.
I sat in the on the sides and breathed out at how great the bubbles felt.
"Oh my, this feels so good," I mutter and Aiden just sits in looking all grumpy.
I show him my phone where the comment read.
Quillan23: You guys look so happy. I'm proud of you! See you soon.
Aiden blanches and I frown.
"Maybe I should follow him-"
"No. Give me that." He grabs my phone and does something.
"What're you doing?"
"There." He hands it back to me and the comment was deleted. I tried searching for the person but I couldn't find them.
"Do you know them?" I ask raising an eyebrow and he shakes his head.
"I don't."

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