Chapter 3 – A Turning Point in Kiss My Revenge The Heiress Strikes Back by Elma Evert
In this chapter of Kiss My Revenge The Heiress Strikes Back, Elma Evert introduces major changes to the story. Chapter 3 shifts the narrative tone, revealing secrets, advancing character arcs, and increasing stakes within the Romance genre.
Everyone's attention snapped to the doorway.
The girl standing there couldn't have been more than twenty. She wore a baseball cap, a simple t-shirt, and straight-leg jeans. She looked fresh and casual, but to the Lancaster family, she seemed somewhat shabby.-
"Who is she? How did she get in here?" Jonas sprang to his feet, questioning.
Lavinia, however, was practically vibrating with excitement. "Miranda! It's you! You're back!"
Miranda glanced at Lavinia, a slight smile tugging at her lips. "To be precise, I'm out."
Seeing Lavinia so enthused left everyone else in the room bewildered. Lavinia, known for her composure, was visibly shaken by this girl's appearance. Who was she, exactly?
The Lancaster family exchanged puzzled looks.
"Lavinia, do you know her?" Susan asked suspiciously. "Is she your daughter from somewhere?"
Lavinia regained her composure and smiled at Miranda. "She is the one who can save Mom."
At this, the Lancaster family erupted.
"Are you kidding?"
"Her? A kid can save mom?"
"Have you been deceived? Mom's illness can't even be cured by the world's top experts, and you think she can?"
"Ha! This is who you say can save Mom? Lavinia, do you think this is a funny joke?"
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From the elders to the younger ones, everyone in the Lancaster family questioned, even mocking Lavinia's sanity.
Lavinia's expression turned serious. "I asked Miranda here to treat Mom. If anything goes wrong, I'll take full responsibility."
Miranda ignored the rest of the Lancaster family and directly asked Lavinia, "Did you bring what I need?"
Behind him, a dozen bodyguards stood in respectful formation, their presence a clear warning to keep away.
Miranda raised an eyebrow slightly.
That physique... impressive. And paired with that face.
Wow.
His arrival made the Lancaster family's demeanor shift instantly. Some even looked a bit obsequious, while a few of the younger ones shrank back slightly.
"Aunt Lavinia," he greeted Lavinia with a tug of his lips.
"What brings you here?" Lavinia was pleasantly surprised.
Elian Ashcroft didn’t answer her, instead focusing on Miranda with a cool, appraising look. "Miss, you haven't answered my question."
Miranda moved her lips. "If I fail, I call you dad. If I succeed, you call me that. Deal?"
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In what world was it ever okay for people to like people who hit and punch them? Miranda deserves someone who doesn't hit people, she needs someone who commands respect through kindness, who could show her a world where people respond more to kindness. All this shows is that it's all about money. There was no character development for Elian. He is the typical boring man, tough but soft for the heroine. Seb is the typical mysterious, quiet and strong. Can you introduce another character who would really pique Miranda's interest from the start please. All the stories I've ever read are about strong people getting together, kings, alphas, queens, powered individuals. What about someone ordinary but not too ordinary, someone middle class but hard-working, someone relatable? Okay ,rant over, bye...
I liked it before but her choosi g Elian made it boring pretty fast. He is too childish in front of her. It's your story though. I was hoping she'd neither choose Elian nor Sebastian but someone else. They are now too overpowered, it was getting redundant to read that they're the best at everything. Too much of a power couple is too much. Bye!...
Will there be an update soon please...