Chapter overview: Chapter 67 from Alana
In this standout chapter of the Internet novel Alana, Z Cr4vinz introduces new challenges, powerful emotions, and major plot progress that captivate readers from beginning to end.
Alana's POV
"Alright, we're fed, comfy and ready. Let's get this night started!" Trina yells and I grin thinking that she meant we were going to do something but instead she grabbed James and pulled him to the guest room.
"What...just happened?" I ask and Aiden snorts.
"We all know who's doing laundry this week!" He yells standing and I laugh sarcastically.
"You, if it wasn't obvious." I smile and he turns to raise an eyebrow and I stand to mirror his stance.
"Well, you know how we settle this." He crosses his arm and I smirk.
"Prepare to lose!" I let out my battle-cry charging for him and he prepares himself.
Now, I used to fight, we all know this. But I honestly can't beat Aiden for some unknown reason.
He grabs my shoulders, pushing me away as I try to hit him.
"Are you done?" He asks and I send my feet forward, not aiming for his area, but of course. That's exactly where it hit. "Oh my gosh." He falls to his knees and I gape.
"Baby!" I exclaim and he coughs. "I am so sorry."
"Don't you want children?" He asks strained and I can't help but giggle.
"Let me help you up." I grab him arm, and he doesn't make any movements to get himself up, so I drag his heavy body to the couch. I leave him on the floor and walk to get the ice pack.
"Here..." I say and he was seated on the couch when I returned. He narrowed his eyes at me playfully before grabbing the ice pack.
"I can't believe you would do this to me." He says dramatically and I roll my eyes. "I thought you loved me."
"I do."
"No, you don't!" I can't help but laugh as he sighs in relief while placing the icepack. I sit next to him and he moves away.
"Really." I raise an eyebrow.
"I'm not talking to you." He says grumpily.
"But I just-"
"Hmph."
"Babe-"
"Hmph."
"Aiden-"
"Hmmph!" I shut my mouth and he purses his lips to keep laughing from my expression.
"That's fine. I hope you like sleeping with pillows." I stand walking away.
"Trina and James are in the guest room."
"I'm sure they don't mind me sleeping with them!" I answer swinging open their door and I knew they were dating but....
"Already?!" I scream and Trina does the same.
"Hot damn!" James yells frightened as he covers them. Aiden quickly shows up behind me and even he gapes.
"Alana!" Trina yells and I snap out of it.
"I did." I nod and he looks sad.
"I'm going to Atlanta in a few days. I got a job out there." He says.
"That's...that's food. I'm happy for you." I avert my eyes and he frowns.
"I just wanted to see you. To say goodbye for the last time." He sighs and I nod, tears pricking my eyes. "What I did was terrible...I understand why you wouldn't want me around."
"Believe me, I forgive you. But... I can't...I can't have that piece of the last with me. I need to let it go." He nods, gripping my hand and I let him.
"I'm proud of you. You made a life of you're own...you're married. You're exactly the opposite of me and you made yourself. I...I'm really proud of you." He repeats and I wipe the tears from my eyes quickly, standing.
"Thank you...I hope all goes well."
"Goodbye, Alana." He smiles sadly and I avert my eyes to keep from crying.
"Bye, dad."
"Why can't you just tell me where she is?"
Crap.
He's awake.
I'm going to die.
"Because I don't know man!" James answers and I slowly open the door. Aiden turns towards me and he narrows his eyes.
Great.

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